Due to the first one having violence I have to change it. So this the new ending. I hope you all like it.
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Torvald: So she really is gone. My little skylark has left me forever. What will everyone think of me now? [there is a knock at the front door] Oh! Nora you came back for me! [rushes to the door and is disappointed at the site] Dr. Rank, what are you doing here?
Dr. Rank: [in his outdoor clothes. Looks extremely pale] Torvald, is Nora here?
Torvald:[sadly] No. She has left. Why don't you come in Dr. Rank?
Dr. Rank: I'm afraid I can't Torvald. I have some business to attend to and all I wanted to do was to say goodbye.
Torvald: Rank. Nora left me.
Dr. Rank:[stops in his tracks] What happened?
Torvald: Nora said she needed to educate herself.
Dr. Rank: Don't worry Torvald. She just needs to work some things out then she will come back to you.
Torvald: You know what, you are right. Goodbye Dr. Rank.
Dr. Rank: Goodbye Torvald.
[three months past. Dr. Rank has past away. And Nora comes back]
Nora: Torvald. How are things?
Torvald: Good Nora, dear. What about you?
Nora: I'm well. I actually came back to take the children.
Torvald: [shocked] What?!
Nora: I realized I need my children. Please tell them to pack their things.
Torvald: [hesitently] Very well.
Nora: goodbye torvald. [ takes the children and leaves]
Torvald: Goodbye my dear Nora.
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So there is the new ending. I hope you like it.
I commented on Andrea, Elizabeth, Darian, and Hailey's blogs
ReplyDeleteI liked your ending, I especially liked when Nora decided to come back to get her kids and left hopefully to teach them something better and useful to their lives.
ReplyDeleteYour ending was perfect. I didn't even expect it coming. I like that you made it seem like Nora would really come back for him. I also like how you had Torvald communicating with Dr. Rank. Keep in mind that he just confessed his love to Nora.
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